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I'm sorry I hurt you.
I'm sorry you cared.
I don't know why I did it,
I think I was just so scared.
I didn't know what else to do,
and I definately didn't want to worry you;
So I hid from your sight,
behind a mask filled with smiles and delight.
But when I was most vulnerable,
and my mask began to fade;
You saw what I had been doing
much to your dismay.
Your voice, both gentle and soft
with that look of gloom
made me start to swoon.
I didn't realise it would effect you so great
but you still held me straight.
I had to turn around and go away.
I couldn't handle this tragic story.
But before I left, I heard you say,
"I love you more and more each day"
Once again I broke down
and left him there all alone.
I needed to think
and when I did,
I rushed back to where it all began,
only to realise he was gone
and I was to travel along this path alone.
It was all my fault;
I couldn't believe it.
And now I lost my one true soul.
It's been ages since I've written anything, but either way I hope someone likes it :)
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:icongaara--94:
Gaara--94 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:) if i could add it again i would <3
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Gaara--94 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
heey... does this have anything to do with certain recent events?? im always there for a hug you know :hug:
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MysticMidnightRose Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011
Nope something entirely different. :)
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Gaara--94 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
more problems in paradise honey?
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Writer
It is so sad, but extremely beautiful. Wonderfully written. :blackrose:
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MysticMidnightRose Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011
Thank you so much. It means a lot :D
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Professional Writer
You are truly welcome :)
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Razputin42 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Been on the other end of one of those cases : / Hope what you've written is somewhat universal, because that would make it... Better somehow, I guess.
Like it very much, anyways.
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MysticMidnightRose Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011
Thanks, it sucks aye. Well it can be universal because it's up to the individual to interpret the poem in a way that relates to them I suppose :D Thanks for your comment <3
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Razputin42 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very much welcome : )
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